Thats really beautiful.
Thats really beautiful.
"We saw mountains, islands, and desert,
To separate would cause much hurt."
This portion seems to sound awkward when compared to the rest of the passage. I think it needs to be improved to bring it up to the standard set by the rest of the piece.
Nicely written.
"We saw mountains, islands, and desert,
To separate would cause much hurt."
This portion seems to sound awkward when compared to the rest of the passage. I think it needs to be improved to bring it up to the standard set by the rest of the piece.
Nicely written.
Great stuff, feel free to post in is a poet himself
Great stuff, feel free to post in /s/theosopiumden @theodorekent is a poet himself
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