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death on splendid wings did call and all the wicked angels fall so god was left weeping, only him his perfect glory, his only sin

pedestals of lonely dust the memory of shadows near quaint by candle light scholars busts replaced the spirits, became mans saints

vast aeons now had come and past gone was Goliath god at last but none like him could cry a tear for True Love lost, alone with fear

so we made our own gods so we crafted angels out of man and plied the stars as the oceans and reigned in fire's chariot by mortal hands

on the tombstone carved for eternity a single commandment stood alone "love thy neighbor as I loved thee"

Farewell Goliath, strange father ours we never did know you ...but you loved us all the same

death on splendid wings did call and all the wicked angels fall so god was left weeping, only him his perfect glory, his only sin pedestals of lonely dust the memory of shadows near quaint by candle light scholars busts replaced the spirits, became mans saints vast aeons now had come and past gone was Goliath god at last but none like him could cry a tear for True Love lost, alone with fear so we made our own gods so we crafted angels out of man and plied the stars as the oceans and reigned in fire's chariot by mortal hands on the tombstone carved for eternity a single commandment stood alone "love thy neighbor as I loved thee" Farewell Goliath, strange father ours we never did know you ...but you loved us all the same

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9/10 Missing some seasoning I would punctuate more, quickly - before the Anticlutch kvetches in the comment section

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before the Anticlutch kvetches

idc.

I hope they kvetch at my kitsch writing.

Not gonna lie, Anticlutch has big "I saw a black mans pee pee once so I'm super mad" energy about him. Or zim. Or zher. Wouldn't wanna descriminate.

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I've seen enough honesty from anticlutch that I suspect hes wrongfully maligned. But I could be completely wrong.

I havent seen enough of his comments in total to say for sure though.

We weren't any better back when God was the bees knees, either.

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Edgy atheist shit. 'We wuz godz' shit. 1/10.

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Edgy atheist shit.

Its an ode to the general unhappiness I felt at society forgetting god in favor of modernity.

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Oh, Well I completely misunderstood then. Carry on, you weird word-talker.