If you want to reach the young kids that don't know this and have been lied to and you have to produce things that are much faster paced. The slow tone of your speaking and the fact that you take 5 minutes to even get to the part about Europeans being good just doesn't fly with young people today you've got to hit them with the point you want to say in the first five seconds or they move on. You say a lot of actually good things here what you say it at a very slow pace. Talking slowly does not increase the importance of what you say. It doesn't make people think the documentary is more serious or more authoritative. Not anymore. The very first sentence of your documentary should be something about why white people are great and should be proud. I would suggest something like: "In a world filled with slavery the white Anglo-Saxon Protestants like Thomas Jefferson fought from day one of his first time in government to get rid of slavery in Virginia and in the nation and put it into the Constitution from the first day they signed it that in 20 years they would end the slave trade and when Thomas Jefferson was president the very first time it was legal to end the slave trade he actually did sign a law that outlawed the importation and selling of new slaves into the United States or the equipping of any boats produced in the United States to participate in the international slave trade thus doing what they thought would actually end slavery at that generation."