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Oh absalom, oh absolam! A diadem for babylon In my hand fair absalom, oh absalom, oh absalom

not albion, nor abalon jubilant the pseudo-khan. Turkman and aryian. pakistan and great ghangis khan

who crossed the ghangis, and vlads gate beheld by all emerald-like, exhult! the emirate! and harems, scented, with exotic flowers rich their kings, emperors their hours

all was earth their paradise, and powers But absalom they treasured most high above all else In the hanging gardens where erudite scholars scrawled of the alexandrian tower, inspired by her fall her grace jaundiced all eyes for the jealous prize the diadem for babylom. oh absalom, oh absalom!

And peasants and pharaohs wept to see her go. Now none the memory but her exultations All merchants, all kings, called her home, all nations. the bethlehem of carnal delights highest heaven, and abomination.

oh absalom, oh absalom. bedlam and dwelling place gemorahh and sodom.

ended in your shining hour no more to rise again but perhaps the spirit in the ages whir arise anew, named another exalting, immanentize the eschaton!

Oh absalom, oh absolam! A diadem for babylon In my hand fair absalom, oh absalom, oh absalom not albion, nor abalon jubilant the pseudo-khan. Turkman and aryian. pakistan and great ghangis khan who crossed the ghangis, and vlads gate beheld by all emerald-like, exhult! the emirate! and harems, scented, with exotic flowers rich their kings, emperors their hours all was earth their paradise, and powers But absalom they treasured most high above all else In the hanging gardens where erudite scholars scrawled of the alexandrian tower, inspired by her fall her grace jaundiced all eyes for the jealous prize the diadem for babylom. oh absalom, oh absalom! And peasants and pharaohs wept to see her go. Now none the memory but her exultations All merchants, all kings, called her home, all nations. the bethlehem of carnal delights highest heaven, and abomination. oh absalom, oh absalom. bedlam and dwelling place gemorahh and sodom. ended in your shining hour no more to rise again but perhaps the spirit in the ages whir arise anew, named another exalting, immanentize the eschaton!

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See I never had training or education on form so I wouldn't know. Maybe I missed something, maybe not.

Where'd you learn?

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Used to be a songwriter. Actually experiment with my own ideas of form, but did write a villanelle about Gilles de Rais. Certainly take inspiration from the masters too. Ezra pound, TS Eliot, Jorge Luis Borges, Coleridge, some ancient Greeks, etc.

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villanelle about Gilles de Rais.

I can only imagine.

Never was much familiar with Ezra Pound, but TS Eliot is obviously a classic.

I learned about contrast from a quote by Frederick Douglass. Yeah yeah I know who he is. But this one quote of his always stuck with me " It is not light that we need, but fire; it is not the gentle shower, but thunder. We need the storm, the whirlwind, and the earthquake."

Whats your favorite Coleridge?

Not familiar with Horge Luis Borges.

Also, songwriter?

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Borges is great. Argentine. Bit of a philosemite, but explored many different cultures. Labyrinths, enigmas, dreams, metaphysics.

Kubla khan of course, the spidery witch one - name escapes me.

Yeah, I'm 'retired'. Would always write poetry too. Some things you can accomplish only in any medium... Benadryl kicking in. Bout to fall out